Post by Trillian on Nov 7, 2010 17:47:30 GMT -5
Name: Illuminata
Nickname: Luma
Breed: Java X Holstien
Gender: Mare
Age: 2
Season Born: Spring
Year Created Year One
Description: The first thing you notice about this mare is her luminous blue eyes. They are a vibrant sky color that catches the attention and the bright vibrant life in them keeps it. Her neck is on the rather short side because of her Java heritage but her legs are long and she is well muscled. She gets her elegant head and long thing nose from her mother, who was pure Holstien. Her main pelt is white while big black spots with friad edges mark her at odd points on her body. On the top of her rump is a splash of brown roan. Her mane and tail have both of her main colors in them, most of it being black while there are some white highlights.
Weight:980lbs.
Height: 16.HH
Personality: Luma is sweat of heart, a equine who prefers too befriend on site rather than snub them. She likes to think the best of someone and prefers not to gossip or listen to others tell tall tails. Illuminata doesn’t easily forget things, though she easily forgives. Some call her nieve and stupid for acting so, but others call her their greatest confident and best friend. She may give her loyalty easily but it’s not easily broken. Luma is perfect for telling your darkest secret, for she’d be tortured and sent to an early grave before even a whisper escaped. Strong emotions come easily to her and she can change from one high to another.
History: Luna a pure white mare with a single black spot on her rump was grinning in triumph down at her first foal. Not only had she bore a female equine, but the foal strongly resembled her sire. No one would doubt that the foals father was Kizars, the band leader. O, they had doubted, all the other mares. They had claimed that I’d gallivanted off and slutted around. But the proof was for all to see.
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My early life was rememorable, a time that I would, if given the chance to, go back to. When my father first saw me, joy was etched into his features. The past few mares had given birth to colts. So he had started to worry. “You shall be my Illuminata to light my heart.”
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Because my father loves his little female look alike, mother got more attention from him, which she reveled in. Rubbing it in the other mares faces. The older mares didn’t like me much but I got along with the foals my age just fine.
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My life was good, playing all day and sleeping between my loving parents. Even when mother bore another foal and gave birth to a colt that though had more black still looked like father I got loving attention. You could say my life was paradise.
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But paradise isn’t forever. I was to turn three full cycles in half of a season when my entire life changes.
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Because I didn’t like this part in my history I’ll make it quick. Father had a brother. The rumors about my mother had been true. She had run off with Kavar, the younger brother. I the time she had disappeared she had conceived me. Even though it had taken Kumlyn almost three years to find my mother again he claimed that he still loved her. She left with him. Too shocked and uncomprehending my father had stood still, dead and unmoving as the love of his life left him.
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Things slowly got worse, mother didn’t take me or Kantro with her. It was like father lost a part of himself when mother left. Like he was moving in slow motion and dying inside. I tried to comfort him but that only remade him recede further into himself. Then one day he snapped.
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Banishment is no fun, never try it.
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